Callas and Roses - Correction Made

Roses and Callas

12x9 watercolor on Yupo paper

Artist Note.

It was good to read all the positive 

comments on my last post

and I thank you for them.

I agree and do believe that there 

may have been more 

energy it that version, but once I saw 

something 

I did not like, I had to make the change.

Culprits... the two

facing callas, left and right,

I thought of "horns" when I finally "saw" them

(see below)

To make the change I became cautious.

I painted some paper I matched with 

the general background

 color and hovered over the two shapes

to decide which one I would change.

The dominant right one had to go

.

Hats off to clever Sea Dean who 

spotted my  problem with the first

version. Sea put it this way

" PS I bet it's the clone Callas left and right,

 but sometimes these aberrations are what gives

 the painting it's quirkiness and prevent the

chocolate box effect. 

That's where artistic license comes in.

Excellent -  Now I have to figure out

if they are  too chocolate boxy 

Any thoughts anyone?

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